I have put together my sales letter and
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Brett, I am so
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implicitly. You are one of the good guys.
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From:
Brett McFall, 9.13am, Deep in the Blue Mountains, NSW, Australia
Dear Friend,
I've seen more money
wasted than most people. As a copywriter and marketing consultant
I've seen thousands of dollars slipping through the
fingers of entrepreneurs who have a good product - but they don't have a
clue on how to make it enticing to buy.
And the NUMBER 1 reason is
that they don't know...
... how to write "sales copy."
This is what you're
reading right now - COPY. Most websites suck. And for one reason only.
THE COPY IS DEAD BORING.
I can tell you that if your e-book
actually has a market and yet you're
not making enough sales, there's one reason why. What's standing between you and a fortune of money
is ...
... your sales letter.
I should know, I do it for a
living. I've written over 8,000 of the suckers. For 153 different
industries. I get paid mega bucks to do it. And once I write the copy, the
products sell like crazy.
Now, I don't say that to
impress you. I don't have to. All I need you to know that isyou need
help.
And that's what I've got for
you - your "copywriter in a box."
What is it?
Dead-simple-to-use copywriting software that virtually does it all for
you.
"What about the other
copywriting
software out there? What makes
yours any different?"
Why I'm glad you asked!
Because I've used ALL of them. And in my opinion not one of them
makes it simple enough for the beginner. Look, writing a sales letter
isn't rocket science. But you DO
need to know what you're doing.
And the programs I've
experimented with, TURN YOU OFF from writing, instead of getting you
pumped up to produce one.
There's either too many steps to follow
(which means
you get discouraged and never use it). Or, they simply provide you with
a template that you have to go in and turn into a sales letter on your
own anyway.
Well, stuff all that.
It
doesn't need to be that hard.
My BRAND new software makes it
DEAD EASY to churn our your own sales letters at lightning quick pace.
I’ve just
purchased your BURPIES software and
it’s
bloody fantastic. I’ve bought 3 other programs in the
past and to be honest … they were crap.
In fact, I loved
using BURPIES so much I was up till 1pm last night playing
around with it. After I had finished my letter I wanted to buy
my own book ... hahaha!
John Ward,
Edinburgh, Scotland
Hi Brett. I would
like to say "thank you!"
Your BURPIES
software is the best thing since sliced bread. You can
create copy any way you want with it,
not only for Ebooks, but also for great copy long or short.
I would
recomend it to anyone that needs to write copy but cant get the
hang of it. Great stuff keep up the good work.
John Newberry, UK
B.U.R.P.I.E.S. is GREAT!
I bought your book "How to make money while
you sleep" after seeing your
segment on Channel 9 ("A Current Affair").
Anyway I couldn't read it fast enough.
Two days latter I'd finished it along with
summarizing all the key points
into two pages....constructed a project plan
and 12 month financial plan for
B.U.R.P.I.E.S. allowed me to get the main
crunchy part of the project done
quickly and painlessly.
Keep up the good work.
Trevor Dudley, Western Australia
What is it?
Well B.U.R.P.I.E.S. is
the world's easiest copywriting formula. It's MY
secret little formula that makes prospects want to buy your product like crazy.
It will easily make your
sales letter at least 10x more
effective ... and possibly more.
I used the formula for years without anyone really knowing that I was. Including
me! I just naturally wrote sales letters using this formula. It wasn't
until I went back and broke it down that I realized if I gave YOU the
same formula to use, that you'd be able to pump out killer sales letters
like me!
So I designed my own software
that does basically everything for you. And I mean, you end up with a
sales letter that is 95% ready to go.
All inside 30 minutes.
Your headline is written
Your introduction is
written
Your bullets are written
Your guarantee is written
Your testimonials are
written...
...and guess what else?
Virtually every word of your sales
letter is written by YOURS TRULY - that's right,
95% of it has already
been written by me(a copywriter
with over 16 years experience in 153 different industries)
So you don't have to worry about
"what to say" or "how to say it" (which is
the biggest stumbling block stopping you from writing your own
"killer sales letter" right now! But no more of that for you when
you've got B.U.R.P.I.E.S. working for you)
You'll get a letter which is
professionally written every time ... and so hot that it
literally melts the screen, leaving you to worry about ...
whatever it is you like to worry about ....
;-)
You'll have a
magic formula working
for you that I've personally fine tuned over the past 10 years into
a literally unstoppable combination (and
that's the difference - my formula actually works)
Inside the first few seconds you'll
have your best prospects saying "You know what? I'm want to
know more about this..." - and that's the critical first
hurdle that every marketer has to get over (most don't)
My magic formula actually answers
your reader's questions and objections in the perfectly logical
sequence that it takes to lead to a sale
(yet they don't even realise it - that's the subtly that a
copywriter with REAL experience knows how to do ... and the good
news is, THAT copywriter is you!)
And not only that, but you'll also
have the freedom to adapt the letter to your own pet tastes
afterwards (just use MICROSOFT FRONTPAGE
to edit your letter till your heart's desire - you aren't locked in to a rigid
format ... in fact my secret formula is quite invisible to the
uneducated eye)
So wouldn't this be cool
to have working on YOUR website?
Well it is!
In a matter of minutes you've
got yourself a money making machine that is ready to be unleashed on
your prospects. Yet you don't know a damned thing about copywriting!
Imagine being able to
churn out
a sales letter for your e-book...
... that as soon as prospects read it they know they "must" have it. Wouldn't that be great?
Or what about if you could
follow the proven dynamic copywriting formula that I personally use to make hundreds of thousands of dollars a year
(this sales letter formula is the "secret bomb" that blows my readers away without them even realizing
it - it naturally leads them through the sales process in just the right
sequence).How would that feel if you could do this?
Imagine being able to
have your letter finished and ready to make sales for you in just 30 minutes time
from now?
No more stressing out for weeks trying to get your sales message right ... or struggling to put it all together - YOU WILL HAVE IT DONE IN 30 MINUTES, AND YOU'LL BE SHOCKED AT HOW EASY IT IS TO DO.
It truly is possible.
And it's
not like any other copywriting
software you've ever seen before.
Why?
Simply, most other developers
try to be everything to everyone.
And so their copywriting software is
too general. Which means it's value is diminished. You can't be
everything to everyone, right? You just end up creating a weaker
product.
That's why THIS software is
perfect for "e-book" entrepreneurs. That way you can be sure that it's
totally designed for what you're going to use it for.
It's also "doh!" easy to use.
I
created it out of pure frustration. I knew that beginners were getting sucked
into buying software that would end up sitting on their desktops
collecting cyber dust. They were just too impractical to use.
So I started from scratch and
created what I would want if I were starting out. You basically don't
need to know anything about copywriting at all. Yet anyone who reads
your letter will swear you've been to one of my "$10,000
Copywriting Master Classes."
How does it work?
Simple.
You'll answer a few questions about your e-book. Hit the
"create" button, and like a magician pulling a rabbit out of a hat, your
sales letter is written in HTML (ready for you to edit in your chosen
web authoring software).
I'm not pulling your leg. I've done all the "serious" copywriting work
in the background for you. Made sure all the critical elements are
there. So that every single part flows together as perfectly as a
Lennon-McCartney song.
You know who Lennon-McCartney are, right? JOHN Lennon and PAUL
McCartney?
In fact, I'll be Lennon. You be McCartney. Or YOU be Lennon and I'll be
McCartney. I don't care.
Read this...
Did you know that
Paul McCartney and John Lennon used to write their
songs separately? Paul would write 3 verses of the song. Then John Lennon would write a section that sounded completely different.
Then
they'd just add them together. It's called the "AABA Formula."
Paul wrote the "A" sections ... and John wrote the "B" sections.
You'll hear this formula in hundreds of their songs. Listen to "Eleanor
Rigby" for instance. First up you'll hear 2 verses - PAUL wrote these.
Then you'll hear a totally different section with a new melody and
completely different feel. JOHN wrote this. And then you'll hear PAUL's
section again. Song finished.
A - A - B - A ... get it?
Amazing huh? But what a combination. Allowing them to write the greatest
hits of all time.
Well... why don't you and I do the same? I've written 90% of the "song"
for you (the sales letter). All that's needed is for you to come in and
add the final touches (the information about your e-book).
Gotta be happy with that right?
And yes, I did use the software to create a lot of this very letter
you're now reading.
Oh... before I forget...
You CAN use my software for
other electronic products and not
just
e-books - that's no problem. In fact, ANY product or service you like.
Your letters ARE fully editable - which
means once you've got the formula in place you can change things to suit
what you're selling (a good suggestion is to use Microsoft
Frontpage for this).
Good news is, you can be using my "B.U.R.P.I.E.S. For E-Books" in as little as 5 minutes from now!
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read what these folks (who give their opinion
of their own free will) have to say...
"I
have to admit ... as a professional copywriter, 'copywriting software' doesn't
switch me on. So when I got a copy of Brett's B.U.R.P.I.E.S. Copywriting
Software I wanted to say 'BAD' before I even tried it.
What a
fantastic surprise. Truth is this:I wrote what I would call a strong sales letter in less than 30
minutes. After a few personal tweaks ... it was a killer!
Usually this process takes me around 3 WEEKS or so!
MY advice to
you is this: If you need a sales letter created to a VERY high
standard with all the tricks and proven tips built in, well, simply said
... this does just that.
I charge around 5k
per sales letter. The price of this is outrageously low. Buy it!
Thanks a million for the great software - it really does work;
you are very clever!
After watching your bonus online video, I used it last night & without
any editing at all (just completely raw - straight to the page) here is
the result.
This is how excited I am about your new
software. It is exactly 9.04pm on
Sunday, and I placed my order at 8.12pm.
I
downloaded the software and had a little "play" without watching any
videos. Within 15
minutes I created my first sales letter. And to think that I
was just about to pay someone $300 just to do 1 letter!
I have 3 products ready to roll out, so the
savings have already been
astronomical. Based on 3 letters at $300 each, I figure that my return on investment of $97
is already 927% in less than 1 hour.
I've been marketing online now for 2 years and
wasted thousands of dollars
on similar products that were essentially overpriced crap that didn't
work. Finally, a product that
delivers on it's promise... and then some.
Sam Vannutini, Bentleigh, Victoria,
Australia
"Brett,
I don't endorse or promote many products sold
on the Internet anymore, because I feel most of them either:
(1) don't work or
(2) are just a complete waste of
time and money.
In the case of your new "Burpies" software, my thoughts have
turned a complete 360 degrees!
My thoughts?
Burpies is something that
everyone NEEDS if they want to survive on the Internet selling and
promoting ebooks.
Your software is a simple ... fill in the blanks ... click the mouse
button a few times approach, and out pops a properly formatted sales
letter and web page... ready to post LIVE to the web!
Long gone is the constant "what am I going to write?" and "I'm
stuck and out of ideas" mindset. And in comes a brand new, fun,
fresh and stimulating way to enjoy writing sales letters.
I've written copy for years, was sceptical when I heard about it, but
now all I can say is "I'm hooked on Burpies".
Thank you.
David Cavanagh
www.davidcavanagh.com
Featured Speaker - World Internet Summit 2004 & 2005,
Australia / USA / UK
Hi Brett
I got your software and cynically thought "I bet this isn't as
easy as it looks"- so with my mindset already in the
negative I messed around with it (at least that's what I thought I
was doing).
I went about a creating a fictitious sales page about how to stop your
dog barking. I literally made up all the elements as they were
requested based on my own experience as a dog owner and very quickly
completed the process.
And I just couldn't believe
what I ended up with - a highly professional sales letter
that looked good and considering how little time I spent on it sounded
highly professional.
With a little time and
thought this tool is going to produce excellent results in a very short
period of time. Thanks for changing my mindset!
Debbie J Fletcher, Brackley, U.K.
Hi
Brett,
Where do I start? Well firstly “thank you” for
making writing sales letters easy! You have
saved me some much time...you see I am hopeless at
detail.
I
used to spend hours trying figure out what to write in
my sales letters. But thanks to you Brett and using your
awesome piece of software,
I can write a sales letter in 30 minutes flat!!!
But
the most important fact of all is that
your sales
letter formula works. Yes it sells! You see,
the first day my site went live I had six people visit
and one person brought from me...Yeeeeeee-haaa!
Thank you for making it EASY for me and giving people
like me … who are not very good at detail … the
opportunity to sell on the internet.
"I used your burpies for my website. I have to say ... awesome man!
Took me 30
minutes max. With a bit of tweaking
I am suddenly an expert sales
letter writer. I love it.
Tony Vizzaro
This software is amazing. The other day I had
to write an E-Bay ad for a downloadable product that I have resale
rights to. Normally it would take me a while to come up with the sales
copy.
But with this software it was done in
less than an hour. What's more, someone won the auction and
sent me a PayPal payment a
few hours later.
Joe Beaven,
Worcester, UK
And don't forget, you could actually use my software to become a high
paid copywriter.
Don't believe me? Check this out for proof:
Brett,
Just wanted to tell you that I purchased your
B.U.R.P.I.E.S. Copywriting Software only two weeks ago and havealready made 24
TIMES the price of it. That's right!
After spending 30 minutes
loading the information into the program and only 20-30 minutes of
tweaking, I sold my
advertising copy to my client for a flat fee of $2,400.00!
The really neat thing is that he
didn't want me to change a thing from my original draft (this has
never happened before).
Let's see $2,400 / $97.00
= 24.74 TIMES!
Although I've made this much and
more on writing copy using your formula before, the kicker here is that
it took me less time to do it!
I figure $2,400.00 in less than
one hours work is the best money I've ever made.
Your friend for life,
Stephen Davies, USA
Hi Brett,
I used your B.U.R.P.I.E.S software
(sounds like a baby at feeding
time) just the other day and yes,
it does exactly what it says
on the box!
I've had some success from writing my own sales letters, but I always
knew I wasn't as good a copywriter as I'd like to be, which is why I
looked around for an affordable solution.
I'm delighted - and impressed too. This is exactly the kind of thing
someone like me needs; a
guiding hand through the maze of writing persuasive sales copy.
The results are so good I feel like taking all the credit if anyone asks
if I did it all myself. But I won't. I'll tell anyone who asks exactly
where to go to replicate the kind of sales letters I can now write,
thanks to you - unless, of course, they're a competitor...
Kind regards,
John Coutts,
Shetland Isles, Scotland
So, what's a resource like this worth?
Well I don't particularly care what other copywriting software programmes on the
market are selling for.
In my opinion they're not worth a cent no matter
what you pay. You're not going to use them long-term (they're too hard
or too clumsy) - and so you'll be lucky to make the money you want to
anyway.
MY software is in a different league.
You'll actually make money if your
product is any good and your market actually has a pulse.
What's more, you'll LOVE using it. This could really be the start of
something big for you.
It's the next best thing to having me personally write it for you. And
that'd cost you $15,000. But don't bother trying that option because
right now I'm not taking on any clients.
You obviously now know that I can write my butt off, right? How? Well
... YOU'VE READ THIS FAR HAVEN'T
YOU?
Anyway, why would you want to pay me $15Gs if you can do it
yourself inside 30 minutes for just...
...$97!
Particularly when you'll be churning out laser-guided sales letters that
are simply irresistible to the eyes and ears of hot prospects.
Whichever way you look at it, it's a bargain for you.
And yes, I plan on
raising the price from $97 to at least double that very soon. Once I get a few
more testimonials from satisfied customers, the price will increase
(right there is a copywriting lesson in itself - you can increase your
prices once you have enough good testimonials - don't forget that).
So
you'll need to be quick if you want to save some money.
"But hey Brett, won't it mean that my letter will
look and read the same as everyone else's?"
Here's what you need to remember: a sales letter's power
has nothing to do with how "different" or "original" it is. It's the
format of a sales letter which makes it such a powerful marketing tool.
It's the logical steps that it takes to reach a sale that makes
conversion rates increase.
Ask any star salesperson and they'll tell you they have a proven way
they get the sales they do. Nothing is left to chance - they use a "system." Not a brand new technique every time.
That's why you'll often hear how copywriters like to model classic
adverts and letters. Why do they do that? Because they
know that psychology NEVER changes. And so an ad that worked 40 years
ago has a real good chance of working the same today.
It's the "formula" behind it which sells.
Not the "new" idea. THAT is a
fundamental principle which you must understand if you want to become a
world-class marketer.
So, you get that critical "formula" through my software. You don't have
to try and reinvent the wheel - THIS wheel works just fine.
And of course you can change the wording if you must.
But it's the
formula behind it which gives you the power.
$97 is a drop in the ocean compared to what you
could make with my copywriting software.
Don't you owe it to yourself to get on this opportunity right now, so
that you can start getting extra sales IMMEDIATELY?
And don't worry, if for any reason you're not happy
with the content, you have a complete guarantee to protect your
investment.
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Hey, you're my customer. And
if you're not happy, it looks bad on me. So if you're not happy with
the sales you get from using "B.U.R.P.I.E.S. For E-Books"
I don't expect ... or want ... to keep your money. Just simply whip off
an email to me within the first 8 weeks, along with your results, and I'll happily refund your money in full (in fact,
I'd be embarrassed to keep it).
But... the SOFTWARE is yours to keep
no matter what,
as a "thank you" gift from me!
Okay? So you really
can't lose! B.U.R.P.I.E.S. is yours no matter what!
That's about as fair as
it gets, don't you agree?
Well let me tell you what
I'll also do to make this the best investment you ever make. I'm
going to throw in some free bonuses that are literally worth more in money terms than my
software itself!
Simply grab your
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and here's what I'll throw in:
FREE BONUS #1:
TUTORIAL VIDEO:
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This amazing
bonus is all about using "B.U.R.P.I.E.S. For E-Books" ... I'll take you through every step nice and easy
You'll
discover:
RHow to simply type in information you already know, and have it "magically" turned into a killer sales letter
RHow my secret formula works in the background until
you're ready to publish your "masterpiece"
R
And the best part is, you can watch it over and over again if you need
to
Not bad, right? But that's not all you get! Because I'm also throwing
in:
FREE BONUS #2:
TUTORIAL VIDEO
"The B.U.R.P.I.E.S. Formula
Revealed"
Are you beginning to see how valuable this package is?
With this bonus you'll know the essentials about writing copy via my
secret B.U.R.P.I.E.S. Formula.
On video I
explain:
R
Every simple step of the formula
(leaving nothing to chance - you'll understand it first time because
it's so amazingly simple)
R
You'll know WHY it works so well
R
You see HOW your prospects are mesmerized by the power of your letter
(nothing sinister - just simply giving prospects the elements they need
to make their decision to buy your product)
RI
talk you through concrete examples too - EVEN blockbuster headlines that
pack a HUGE punch
R
You'll see how every step fits together
(truly - virtually no entrepreneurs know this critical information -
it's the missing link that stops most people from making the sales they
deserve)
R
And see,
once you know this stuff - YOU HAVE POWER
(you have the "system" ... the "secret system" that allows you to write
killer sales messages)
And stacks more. You'll be literally watching over my shoulder just as
if I was there beside you (except you won't have to feed me! ;-)
Phew...that's
not a bad deal right? You really can't go wrong - even if you're a dummy!
(Don't worry, I failed my high-school English exam, so I'm no Einstein
either. But I DO know how to write "killer" copy. And now you can too).
You can't leave this
page empty handed, can you?
For a mere $97,
you're getting everything you need to create your own money-making
machines. Now, you can only get
this product from me. It's not available on e-bay ... or in department
stores ... or anywhere else
on the net. So take action now and start earning much more money from
your sales letters.
P.S. Don't forget, you're losing money by NOT using
my copywriting formula. It's the formula which is the secret behind
great sales letters. So thinking you can do it yourself without my
software is a false economy. And it's fully money-back guaranteed
anyway. So you can't lose.
Get on the fast track now to writing your own sales letters that are amazingly persuasive ... even if you're a complete beginner.
This is the opportunity you've been waiting for.
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